Suddenly, Tom had an idea about his green, slippery, slimy snake. He gathered up some equipment from the classroom. He picked up some scissors, cords, glue, paper and the teacher's lunch. He glued some sheets of paper together and put some cords on the paper to tie the paper together. Tom put the teacher's ham sandwich in the middle. Harry slithered to it while all of the kids in the classroom climbed up on their chairs so the snake couldn't bite their toes off.
Tom grabbed onto Harry and put him back in his bag.
"What a relief! Never bring a snake to school," said Mrs Anderson.
Well done, Lavinia.
- You have described the snake well - green,
slippery and slimy.
- You have used commas between the things you
listed.
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