st.patrick

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Planning
Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing and what he didn't like doing
 - where he was born - what his family was like
He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling his slingshot.
He hated school.
One day,
- didn't go to school
- went to the beach
- pirates came
- stole him and the other girls and boys
- s- One night, heard God talking to him - told him to go the a ship
- when he was on board, - big storm - ship grounded in France
- crew starving
- Patrick asked God for help
- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork dinner and apple sauce old him in Ireland to Milchu
- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs (swine)
- started talked to God - trusted God and was happy

Patrick Mc alpern. His father is a romin soildier , staitioned in england and  the family was quiet rich so the family lived in comfort and style. He liked coming to the beach and liked whittling his slingshot. But he mostly hated school. One day it was  school day and he didn't go to school.So he went to the beach. he stayed there all day and climb trees he sauntered around picking up little tiny peaces of rocks but when he found one he suddenly froze. They were pirates captain and his crew hurried to shore and made a raid on the village.